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Excavation Aorta

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There’s this vein,
running from the stiff formality of my collarbone
to the melodrama of my jaw.

I think of hoses.

My bones are dead branches, their termite tracks
are messages from my past
in fifteen languages. Most of them make no sense.

The oldest note is blurred in the tectonics
of my skull. It reads “Welcome home.”
go nuts with the critiqueing. I'm very open to suggestion on this one. Second draft. or third. fourth maybe. we'll see how it will have gone. willan on be. poem.
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Bexie's avatar
That is so damn good, I love your words. Your write so well.
This kind of poem is always though provoking and this one is no exception, I love the ending. It finishes the poem brilliantly :hug: